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Poetic rhymes flow through my mind like water down a mountain.  

Slowly wearing away at the ground that is my mind, concealed only by the beautiful words of pain that flow down the hills of the years of my life.  

Eventually the beauty fades and the river of poetic beauty runs dry revealing the deep scar etched into the hillside.  

Distorting the once tranquil and surreal enviroment, turning it into a dark and twisted landscape of a poor boys life.  

Over time the river is forgotten, overtaken by the years, only to resurface to destroy an establishment of a useful mind
©2005-2009 ~SedatedProdigy
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Just something I wrote.....

Will be moved to scraps in a few days until I get it revised and re-written.
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wow..that sounds awesome
Thank you :aww:

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For those that know, they do. For those that don't....well, they don't
lovely. You've captured something which has played on many minds for centuries for although poetry may be an expression of emotion, the fact that these emotions may be the result of pain or pleasure and leave a mark on our (the writers) soul is often ignored.

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"Restlessness is always driving me, and i cannot help it" - Charles Dickens.
:giggle: sounds like something i would write :XD: Its fantab, youve described it very beauitfully. :glomp:

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Thanks :D

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For those that know, they do. For those that don't....well, they don't
that was really well put... and i enjoyed what i thought was an insight to the real you :)
What beautiful piece. +fav

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The night he moved out was terrible/That evening she went through hell/ His absence wasn't the problem/But the corkscrew had gone as well.

-The Loss by Wendy Cope-
Beautiful feeling :) Great work!

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~Rayli

Many of life's failures are people who did not realize
how close they were to success when they gave up."

~T. Edison

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